AlexSarzosa's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fountain of Youth]

So lemme break it down for Ya right, NJ CHINESE BUFFET IS FUKING GARBGE! I just got back from there because my mom wanted to try something new, we tried somethin. New alright, tried some salmonella SHIT is what we tried. Jess fuck, an the FREAKS! I've been t Magfest and I've never seen freaks this in bread, I wnt to fuckin CALARTS and didn't see this amount of cousin fcking retards. I had to take a fuckin alwa seltzer when I got home; plop plop shit shit oh what a relief it is, yea, a Fuji relief tht in never eaten at this shit hole again. All TE food has MSG, all the mets are undercooked, they didn't count our fucking coupons either, so my mo had to spend 25 bucks on this shit. She works HARD for tht money, she doesn't deserve this kida treatment, and I won't stand for it, until the NJ Chinese buffet is burned to the FUCKIN GROUND!!!!!!

Cartoon was gay, y du u hate clsc rok, n00b, get pwnd.

[Happy Birthday RyanStorm: The End of Birthday Collabs]

what is evangel? u guys make joke about it in cartoon and i dont no what is? is yugio?

[Happy Birthday UrbanTowel!]

YES!!!!!!!!

[Hey I'm Spider-Man: Episode 7]

boobums!

RyanStorm responds:

don't talk shit about boonebum >:I

[Ericsorcism]

this is fucking awesome, keep up the fluid movements and shit man!

[Treasure Trouble]

Your colors are pretty rough, it seems like you don't know whether or not it should be vibrant or moody sort of color tones, so it creates a confusing sort of atmosphere and environment. Also the only exceptionally well animated sequence was during the robot fight, besides that a lot of the perspective gets messed up and the character has no real weight. Also, you like, tweened some shit at the end when he runs over to the chest, c'mon man, that looked awful. Your character design was a bit cluttered and could have once again been colored in a more appropriate way, it seems like all of his colors don't necessarily fit his character. The song was pretty good, but no sound effects really killed it. Also i know you've been working on this for several months now, but yeah, hopefully your next thing will look better. take some time to practice animation and shit before hopping into your next project.

TopSpinThefuzzy responds:

hey! First, thanks for your honest critique.
You're absolutely right about the colours, and shading especially. I'm in the midst of experimenting with all that and learning what direction I wanna take.

And perspective you're absolutely right, and in failing a lot of shots in this I feel like I learned something to carry over in to another project.

As for tweening.. yeah. Nothing to say there, not sure what I was goin for, you're right again.

But yes, thanks again for the input!

[Happy Birthday MobileSpider!]

Y ES !!!

[Yotam & Fantasia 15]

fuck YEA! yotam and fatasiaaa!!!